Love is deep,
Mysterious and sweet.
Scars of the past,
are to real to last.
pain is only part of love,
but I hide in a building like a small black dove.
This pain inside is far too real,
so instead I'll take this small peice of steel,
I mean what I say,
but it is still true today.
This is sad but still true.
So I'm in my room still missing you!
I still havent found out why some kids these days think it is enjoyable 2 cut themselves.Just one of the new trends in the 21st century I guess. But I like the rhyming though. For a girl who thinks shes Emo! : (
Awesome poem Hali, a ten from me. It's seems sweet and honest but also holds raw emotion. I also like your rhyming, and can relate well. Highly enjoyed. -Kylie M. Lynch
i agree with nothing hurts like love this poem is full of meaning really deep
Hali this poem is awesome I love it good write, I can't wait to read more of ur work
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
love it im a give to my bestest friend cuz hes mad at me