David Harris

Gold Star - 4,611 Points (18 June 1945 / Bradfield, England)

Empty Feeling Down Deep Inside - Poem by David Harris

Sometimes we get an empty feeling
down deep inside of us
that we are so alone,
no friends, and no family.
We know it isn’t so,
but that empty feeling,
it still remains to taunt us.
Why we’ll never know.
We could be in a crowded room
and that feeling still resides.
You know that you are not alone,
but you still feel that
empty feeling down deep inside.

18 February 2008


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  • (3/15/2008 10:34:00 AM)

    David,

    Feeling empty and lonely is as universal as the emotion of love - and you've tapped into this rich tapestry with inimitable style

    Cheers
    Anita
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (3/15/2008 5:30:00 AM)

    Yup...i confess...been there too...in fact been there three or four or more!
    I think'll go back to sleep, now & have weird dreams...lol! Excellent Work, David!

    ~ FjR ~
    ..2008..
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (3/15/2008 5:30:00 AM)

    Yup...i confess...been there too...in fact been there three or four or more!
    I think'll go back to sleep, now & have weird dreams...lol! Excellent Work, David!

    ~ FjR ~
    ..2008..
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  • (3/15/2008 4:38:00 AM)

    Poignant penning D. Only, sometimes, the feeling IS true. t x (Report)Reply

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  • (3/15/2008 3:44:00 AM)

    Emptyness is a lonley place, without some one to fill the space with loving grace.. Andy 10 (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 15, 2008



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