Empty Mind Poem by Kolitha Lelwala

Empty Mind

Rating: 4.5


Mind is empty
It never touches the vision
Nor the smell
Not the taste
Not for the sound
Not for the perceptions
Yet, it cannot be concentrated though…
Difficult to meditate
Mind never idles though
It’s trapped in enigma

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Iboro Akpan 04 August 2022

Wonderful peom and inspiring.

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C. P. Sharma 10 July 2009

You are right, it canm never be filled, its capacity is infinite. CP

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ppp sss 31 December 2008

As I start this piece, I find the title means something diffrent to me by the time I reach the end. As if the poem does some sort of twist or dives to a diffrent layer.

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Greenwolfe 1962 19 July 2008

I gave this a 9 believe it or not because it was too short. I do not believe any poem should ever end in the word enigma. GW62

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