Sanjukta Nag

Gold Star - 21,168 Points (05-07-1992 / India)

Empty Space - Poem by Sanjukta Nag

My body relishes the pride of an astronaut
When it roams like a somnambulist
On infinite space of your midnight heart,
By touching the stars of your emotions
With bare hands and lips.
While I bathe in the softness of moonlight
That your love radiates,
Passionate comets invite me to
Explore more of your invincible galaxies.
But my eyes only give birth to empty dreams,
When your heavy words make my pillow
Soaked with silent tears.
I wonder why I didn't realize before
This universe also possesses a black hole,
To swallow the strength of weak spirits like mine.

Topic(s) of this poem: heartache, love

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Empty Space by Sanjukta Nag

  • Valsa George (10/25/2015 7:36:00 AM)


    A girl who is lured by the galaxies, but sucked by the black hole! Love can be sometimes so damaging! But we realize it only late! This is a remarkably poignant write.... Sanjukta! The analogies used are just splendid! A 10 (Report) Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (10/24/2015 1:15:00 PM)


    Soaked with silent tears! But, there is always hope in life. With the pace of the ace of life. Nice piece. (Report) Reply

  • Jaishree Nair (10/23/2015 5:16:00 AM)


    Love sometimes gives us that empty feeling. Harsh words are like poisoned arrows that wound one deeply. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (10/23/2015 5:15:00 AM)


    It is a pity that a lover who holds an entire universe in his arms ends up in such a wretched state: 'Explore more of your invincible galaxies /...When your heavy words make my pillow / Soaked with silent tears.' Incredible and lovely. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • (10/23/2015 4:07:00 AM)


    A lovely poem for lovers and sad yet can be so true
    Thanks-10++
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/23/2015 2:15:00 AM)


    Another upbeat poem on lovers' dilemma.........You took me for a ride to galaxy of love filled with love and pain....Amusing SN,100 on 10. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/23/2015 1:42:00 AM)


    Very wonderful sharing done. Love radiates but we need to feel through such interesting sharing...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rahman Henry (10/23/2015 1:32:00 AM)


    Well penned poetic work. Wonderfully presented. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 23, 2015



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