Sonny Rainshine


Enclosures - Poem by Sonny Rainshine

It...
(an unfathomable wrong,
an unforgettable song,
a friend’s betrayal,
a grievous tale,
a withholding of care,
shame laid bare,
growing old,
love grown cold,
your leaving,
my grieving)
...hurts.


Comments about Enclosures by Sonny Rainshine

  • (9/26/2006 1:18:00 PM)


    alright, this was slightly creative in its structure, but the ryhme was as smooth as it could have been. (Report) Reply

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  • Alex Nodopaka (4/28/2006 8:53:00 AM)


    Creative. I'd leave a space between the first & last word. (Report) Reply

  • Brian Dorn (4/20/2006 10:17:00 PM)


    Sonny, I like the format of your poem... very creative!
    Brian
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 20, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 1, 2006


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