Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Rookie - 1 Points (November 28,1996 / Springfield, MA)

Endings - Poem by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

My tears pouring like rain
My head hanging down
The whisper of your name
From a voice filled with strain
They escape my lips
Just like the blood
Escaping my wrists
The absence of laughter
No happily ever after
The movies in my head
Of the amazing moments we've had
Lost the sweetness
And gained the sorrow
Reflecting this loss
With my chest feeling hollow
The end of a chapter
I can't stop re-reading
In the futile hope
That it'll be repeating

Comments about Endings by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

  • Hassan Adan (6/21/2012 11:41:00 AM)

    I enjoyed the flow and rhythm of the poem, keep it up (Report) Reply

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  • (6/20/2012 5:29:00 AM)

    OOOOh Best poem up to now Think this is the best so far i've read 5 this is the best especially it's someway the style of writing i prefer I love how you use metaphors and have a good imaginary as to your age i say this is some very good work I've classed it in my Top 10 Poems By Members Congrats
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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 16, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 17, 2011

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