Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Rookie - 1 Points (November 28,1996 / Springfield, MA)

Falling Dreams - Poem by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

A shattered glass like silence now pervades
The secret space; she keeps her dreams concealed.
Uneasy once, the stars now quell and aid
Her doubt. A gaze upon the sky revealed
A hope. The glinting in the sky composed
Of burning light sometimes becomes less strong.
Deserted stars die hardly now, disposed
Of hope at home, never moving along.
Most jewels of night aflame within their bed
Reside up high almost eternally,
And stay so strong when faced with dark ahead,
Serene and bright for all the world to see.
She can't let dreams of hers be painful scars;
She won't let dreams of hers be falling stars.


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  • Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (6/23/2014 9:35:00 AM)

    Beautifully it is written and happily it is read. A great poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Soumita SarkarSoumita Sarkar (6/23/2014 12:31:00 AM)

    A very thought of poem..liked. (Report)Reply

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  • Jayne DaviesJayne Davies (6/23/2013 12:58:00 AM)

    A beautiful write! Well done! (Report)Reply

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  • Hazel DurhamHazel Durham (1/2/2013 2:31:00 PM)

    I loved this poem with it's beautiful imagery, just perfect! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Suzaku VanekoSuzaku Vaneko (10/24/2012 3:04:00 PM)

    Wow! What an amazing poem! Truly amazing! You have talent my friend! ^_^ (Report)Reply

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  • Autumn Winds (8/12/2012 4:15:00 PM)

    I really enjoyed reading this poem. The your descriptions create beautiful and inspiring imagery. Your poem flows very easily and well
    Nice poem: D
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  • Kelly SealeKelly Seale (8/12/2012 3:51:00 PM)

    Simply Beautiful! ! ! Loved this one Tiffany! Very well penned! Loved your imagery! ! ! Great Ink! ! ! ; -)
    -Kelly.
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  • Roland HoustonRoland Houston (8/3/2012 11:17:00 AM)

    Very moving, very emotional (Report)Reply

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  • Prashansa VaikunthePrashansa Vaikunthe (7/15/2012 5:33:00 AM)

    you really composed it very nicely......awesomme.. (Report)Reply

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  • Marcella D (7/12/2012 10:44:00 AM)

    Now this is what I am talking about, it is not the best poem in the world (sorry) , but I like it because this is like something out of a childrens book :) nice job (Report)Reply

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  • Blossom Mist (7/4/2012 12:29:00 PM)

    Hey, I apologize for the late response... Well my dear.. you write with great depth.. difficult for someone of your age... You are an amazing poetess! ! keep up the good work! ! I am sure you'll touch the Stars! ! ! Simply beautiful (Report)Reply

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  • Kevin PatrickKevin Patrick (6/29/2012 8:24:00 PM)

    It’s very enchanting almost like staring into a dream of a romantic poet who graced this world two centuries ago. You ware your inspiration to your sleeve. Good stuff (Report)Reply

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  • Whisperkwane Lamb (6/29/2012 3:20:00 PM)

    Young queen you have awaken in a dream where women are truly a gift...you...my friend said it all...love, romance...a wanted wish...love stinks...but taste so good...with the right mind frame...you have that...and the adventure of roaming love...is wishful...so is santa cluse...very good write for someone so young...but yet... a queen in your owm right...keep your pen close to you...very good...no..outstanding (Report)Reply

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  • Jinal OswalJinal Oswal (6/29/2012 8:58:00 AM)

    You really are optimistic and passionate.. Let your dreams take a shape and shine like a star... I loved your writing. (Report)Reply

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  • Nik Hasif Nik HasbollahNik Hasif Nik Hasbollah (6/29/2012 2:41:00 AM)

    Fascinating, there's nothing I can say to you, you're better than me... :) All the best (Report)Reply

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  • Sd TiwariSd Tiwari (6/28/2012 8:16:00 PM)

    Wonderful sonet you have written. A nice theme with nice flow and rhyme.
    good words with metaphoric use. All the best
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  • Thyris TaylorThyris Taylor (6/28/2012 1:31:00 PM)

    I really enjoyed this poem. It has depth and it takes you on a emotional rollar coaster right to the end of the read. Well done, I loved it. (Report)Reply

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  • Antonio Liao (6/28/2012 12:01:00 AM)

    oh! yeah! what a wishing dream, it capture my life the wonder of illusion and imagination....
    of which reality is true...a genuine passion of the heart that perfected in the eyes of the beholder...thank you and God bless....10/10
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  • Jacques S MateyaJacques S Mateya (6/26/2012 12:30:00 PM)

    Good poem beyond description! (Report)Reply

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  • Ency BearisEncy Bearis (6/25/2012 7:32:00 AM)

    Impressive poem, nice imagery (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 4, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 11, 2012


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