Thursday, November 22, 2007

Endless Shores Comments

Rating: 5.0

I look across the sea at all the waves that are rolling,
Towards the coastline on which I now stand,
The ocean keeps changing and rising and falling,
The colour of sky as it touches the sand.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Bonnie Collins 05 October 2008

What a beautifull write filled with so much pain as the waves of the sea rush in and rush out, like the ponding of your aching heart for a love that was oh so sad to end... I enjoy all your writtings you know that, dont you? But once in awhile one comes along, and as I read your opening stanza I knew I was reading your heart as you stood on the raging sea........ Bonnie

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Ernestine Northover 28 February 2008

Another WOW and another delightful poem. Your expertise is endless. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Hannah Mcgill 26 December 2007

I love your use of metaphors. It describes life in an interesting way. Beautiful Poem.

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Thad Wilk 22 November 2007

Another beautiful write Andrew! I enjoy reading your poems! ** 10 **! ! ! Thad

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