Enlightenment Poem by Indranil Bhaduri

Enlightenment

Rating: 4.5


The streets were deserted
With loneliness all around.
As the cute couple walked
Holding each other's hands.
While passion reigned free
A hole unforeseen, came in between
With darkness pulling inside!
They halted, screaming in fright,
Saving themselves from
Drowning in the drains …
Eyes met, lips quivered
Whispers chanted..
Togetherness prevailed..
As lightning struck in sudden rains,
They vividly envisaged-
The pathway in life
During a long hike
Is everlastingly rugged …

Copyright © 2014 Indranil Bhaduri

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yash Shinde 23 March 2014

rapid transition is the very essence of your poems, a beautiful subtle write sir!

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Neela Nath Das 24 March 2014

A unique write Indranil................

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Jasbir Chatterjee 09 May 2014

nice poem...reminds me of the rain scene of the famous Nargis-Raj Kapoor film Shree 420...

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Tanya Gupta 18 April 2014

this is one of the wonderfull poetry that i have ever read. it have so intensity and contentment. loved it

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 05 April 2014

Calm and placid simple touching your poem lovely

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Hazel Durham 28 March 2014

Beautifully written, with such intensity and fear that is the uncertainty of life!

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Dinesan Madathil 25 March 2014

One of the most powerful poetic sketches you have ever made on the PH. A good work indeed sir.

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