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End Of Existence

Rating: 4.6

A breathing bud of life
Lived inside her womb,
Waiting to take a plunge
Into the beautiful crooked world,
In the broad shining daylight.
The closed eyes and the kicks
Made her turn crimson red,
As she blushed feeling shy,
Expressing her eternal glee,
With happy tears as she shed.
Time moved on
As the sharp social claws,
Pounced on the maiden,
And she screamed and cried,
To save the heartbeats inside
But all in vain!
The blood flowing on the floor
Announced the annihilation of existence,
As the budding seed and the lass
Were not there to smile anymore!

Copyright © 2012 Indranil Bhaduri

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This was written keeping in mind the numerous female infanticide happening all over the world.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Manidip Ganguly 25 September 2013

Too Good Boss. Carry on yaar.

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Susanta Pattnayak 01 October 2012

A sad song..beautifully written on a social cause.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 19 September 2012

Great aspects and unique beautiful lines those are the products of a clever mind. well i rally enjoy reading this art. so meaningful

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Anita Sehgal 19 September 2012

beautiful and sad.. great

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Rupika Alekhya 18 September 2012

A Mother does anything and everything to save the heartbeat inside her.. Beautifully weaved lines. Beautifully portrayed.

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Social compulsions made the death of a child. Beautiful expression of feelings.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 March 2016

Time moved on. Thanks for sharing.

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Nishi Kumari 17 January 2016

A nice poem....hurtful indeed...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 July 2015

The blood flowing on the floor Announced the annihilation of existence, As the budding seed and the lass Were not there to smile anymore! .........So deeply envisioned. A beautiful poem having entensive write. Thanks for sharing.......10

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 28 March 2015

A very thoughtful poem indeed.

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