hazem al jaber

Rookie - 9 Points (21 may 1965 / kuwait)

Enough Silence... - Poem by hazem al jaber

Enough silence...







why that silence...

your silence killing me..

why...

please tell me why...

got suddenly silent...

with no reason you got...

why you live into your silences....

got out of my temper...

can`t bear it...

me and my patient yelling and calling you...

don`t keep so long with your silence..

don`t keep me feel pains...

enough suffering...

its so long nights...

enough, please talk...

here i am hearing you...

please talk my sweetheart..

don`t keep me suffering my long darkest nights...





by: hazem02@yahoo.com


Comments about Enough Silence... by hazem al jaber

  • (8/18/2009 2:06:00 AM)


    I understand this piece so well. (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (8/17/2009 5:47:00 PM)


    This poem captures the pathos of silence that quietly kills ones spirit.I like this poem..the narrator must yell out ENOUGH OF THE NOISE I CAN'T HEAR! this I give a 9 (Report) Reply

  • Maia Padua (8/17/2009 5:01:00 PM)


    This is so touching..sweet words yet their is sadness in feelings..
    Your 'love' runs off?
    you really write so romantically..and sweet...
    10+++ for this, my friend..


    lovelots,

    Maia
    (Report) Reply

  • (8/17/2009 2:23:00 PM)


    Great lovely poem.... thanks 4 sharing (Report) Reply

  • (8/17/2009 7:12:00 AM)


    hope ur fine honey..your poem is so nice..take care..lav this (Report) Reply

  • (8/17/2009 6:51:00 AM)


    wonderful cognitive metaphor:
    ''your silence killing me..''
    wonderful, but very sad lyrical poem...........10+++++
    (Report) Reply

Read all 6 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Monday, August 17, 2009



[Report Error]