Enough Silence... Poem by hazem al jaber

Enough Silence...

Rating: 5.0


Enough silence...







why that silence...

your silence killing me..

why...

please tell me why...

got suddenly silent...

with no reason you got...

why you live into your silences....

got out of my temper...

can`t bear it...

me and my patient yelling and calling you...

don`t keep so long with your silence..

don`t keep me feel pains...

enough suffering...

its so long nights...

enough, please talk...

here i am hearing you...

please talk my sweetheart..

don`t keep me suffering my long darkest nights...





by: hazem02@yahoo.com

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 17 August 2009

wonderful cognitive metaphor: ''your silence killing me..'' wonderful, but very sad lyrical poem...........10+++++

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Sally Plumb Plumb 18 August 2009

I understand this piece so well.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 17 August 2009

This poem captures the pathos of silence that quietly kills ones spirit.I like this poem..the narrator must yell out ENOUGH OF THE NOISE I CAN'T HEAR! this I give a 9

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Miriam Maia Padua 17 August 2009

This is so touching..sweet words yet their is sadness in feelings.. Your 'love' runs off? you really write so romantically..and sweet... 10+++ for this, my friend.. lovelots, Maia

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samar Halabi 17 August 2009

Great lovely poem.... thanks 4 sharing

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Lady Grace 17 August 2009

hope ur fine honey..your poem is so nice..take care..lav this

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