Entity Of Love Poem by Ratnakar Mandlik

Entity Of Love

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</>Then I was quite unhappy
My mind too was gloomy.
A melancholia did captivate me
And the universe was hating me.

Thus, , I became despondent
And felt the life I bear can not.
So dejected I was then
That the death I wished to gain.

In the same mood I slept
But ere for a long I had wept
And in sleep I did pray
The God to make me happy.

After a long you came slowly
You were sad oh my dearie.
From me you begged a promise
Not to brood for own demise.

It was all a sign of entity
Of our love linked with eternity.
Inspiring me to pursue the art
And enjoy laurels quite sweet.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 25 September 2019

And enjoy laurels quite sweet........lovely. Beautifully penned.Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 February 2019

After a long you came slowly You were sad oh my dearie. From me you begged a promise Not to brood for own demise.//// and the LOVE returned at last; its the true true intuition of LOVE // beautiful poem

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 April 2016

And in sleep i did pray. Nice work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 September 2015

Remaining quiet unhappy is a common human nature. But on realization of self life proceeds towards God and becomes so sweet and this brings happiness. Eternity speaks the tale of life cycle. Very finely; y touched poem shared. Interesting, wise and nice with excellent theme....10

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Vipins Puthooran 30 October 2011

Wonderful poem with lots of emotions in the first part and love at the last... I like this poem... Really good write

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Ratnakar Mandlik

Ratnakar Mandlik

Hyderabad(A.P.) , India
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