Etched Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

Etched

Rating: 5.0


Etched
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It was a beautiful scene
Tinged with evening hues
Along the cool sequestered seashore
My soul wished to stray,
See and feel a little more
Winds, waves, sea and sands
And the glory of the setting sun
Incessant lashing of little waves
Plashing in and out
Bringing smell salty and crusty
For long and in loneliness
And on the horizon, a ship
Spreading his banner sailing away
And disappearing out of sight
And the setting sun strikingly picturesque
Going down and down
Where unknown
May be unto his abode down the ocean
For a good night's rest
After the day is done
As I was watching
The Nature's grand event
Everything around, in my memory
Getting weaved and etched
Forever as a treasure of rarity
God's perfect beauty
A superb handiwork
Drawing me closer to divinity......

Wednesday, August 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 14 August 2014

A lovely scene of sunset in the backdrop of the panoramic vista of the blue waters and the sights of waves below and sailing clouds above! A heavenly experience is impressively passed on to the readers! A 10

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Amitava Sur 16 August 2014

A lovely sketching of the picturesque nature sitting by the shore in an eve.

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Geetha Jayakumar 14 August 2014

Beautiful poem. Beautiful scenery you have portrayed. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing. This poem reminds me of my poem Scenery.

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Tadasha Tripathy 14 August 2014

Very beautifully explained scenario. I liked reading it.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 14 August 2014

lovely expression of oneness with the Divine.

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Salini Nair 14 August 2014

awesome write....It was a beautiful scene....................

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