Even Though Poem by Audrey Heller

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Audrey Heller

Audrey Heller

Bronx, New York/ Now residing in Florida

Even Though

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Even though, you're far away, my
thoughts, are with you, everyday!
There isn't a moment, where I don't
wish you were still around, to make
me whole again. When I think back,
it was, so wonderful, then! I've really
never gotten over, the fact of losing
you! I had the hardest time adjusting,
but there wasn't anything, to help me
through. I cried everyday and every
night, it took a lot, out of me, but
somehow, I had, to win this fight! In
time, I settled down, a little bit more,
but you'll forever, live on in my mind,
as this, is how it will always be. And
every time, I close my eyes, you're
the first thing I see! To put it very
plainly, I lost you, but in a way, you'll
always be there. Now, I've finally, come
to grips with my emotions and as long
as I live, I'll care!

Patrick A. Martin 28 August 2009

It's an interesting thing thee are certain people who stay with us I guess for you nad I it's our dads maybe we feel we still need their protection any way I have a lot of empathy with this poem.

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Surya . 28 August 2009

like father, like daughter. a beautiful poem.nice to know about such fond feelings. voted10 surya

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 July 2015

Charged with emotion it is a sweet love poem.Nice.

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Kate Lechoe 29 July 2015

It is always hard to let go someone we love and care about. Nice poem Audrey.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 29 July 2015

very nice poem. Sometimes certain people leave behind an everlasting impression on our minds and hearts.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 31 August 2009

Im so sorry Audrey, I can feel your sorrow too.Be strong and focus dear.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 31 August 2009

interesting and wide. Good imagery and language applied!

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Audrey Heller

Audrey Heller

Bronx, New York/ Now residing in Florida
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