Evening Rain ; ; ; Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

Last line comes with an artistic vibe to it

Just beautiful just beautiful Chris 10

I only give this an 8 because I want more. GW62

Romantically … «with a spring» to leave it would not be desirable … 10//

Evening rain became glorious. Short but a cute composition. Added my 10.

Very good use of imagery here Tsira, great verse. Best wishes, Andrew

The girl with her bright red umbrella adds vividness to the evening rain. Your creative vision is 20/20. Thank you for your kind comment on my poem. Wishing you and your talented pen only the best. Warm regards, Sandra

Beautiful painting with your verses, dear poet Tsira. I give a 9+ (correct some words, omit some needless) . I can dance in this evening rain. Thanks for sharing. Give us more of your rich talent. Joseph S. Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Int.Lib.Poetry awarded

the mystical words sizzle by the rain of evening with message of hope and desire let there be sun again.............wondrfully wrought by the imgery, evening rain when reminds the dances by the green,10+, thanks for sharing

haiku-like delicacy heightens an almost familiar but also hauntingly surreal painting... Rgds, Ivan Evening rain decorated the city, a bright red umbrella became that girl, rainy brushes caressed wet streets... The watercolour landscape dreamt about winds.