Every Moon Sets -11: The Cold Promise Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Every Moon Sets -11: The Cold Promise

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Your cold kisses
on my lips of desire
red with expectations
that are bathed
in the lake of death wishes
remain untraced
in the prescribed map
of unfulfillment
the moon of agony
shines in the sky of pains
above the zenith
of nights of separation.


The butterfly of sin
promises once more
one more night,
one more full moon of sex
to the flower
with a virgin bed.

Saturday, November 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams,love and friendship,moon,sad love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 15 November 2017

the moon of agony shines in the sky of pains above the zenith of nights of separation. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks. 10+++

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Alina Kaikeyi 15 November 2017

Your cold kisses on my lips of desire red with expectations that are bathed in the lake of death wishes remain untraced Lovely sharing. Thanks. 10++++

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Sonali Parida 14 November 2017

the moon of agony shines in the sky of pains above the zenith of nights of separation. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 14 November 2017

Thanks Sonali for the wise and kind remarks on the poem

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Binayakumar Mohanty 11 November 2017

The bulltrfly of sin promises once more.......Nicely crafted.I enjoyed.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 November 2017

Thank you Sir for these remarks with so inspiring words.

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Rini Shibu 11 November 2017

Lovely write Subhas about every moon sets..10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 November 2017

Thank you Rini for these inspiring words.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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