A gust of air-borne hope from kitchen-
For an empty stomach's lope to heaven,
Carrying the smell of a broken egg-
Thrown upon frying-pan and hot dog,
Adding to the hunger fed mope and pain.
A funny limerick... Adding to the hunger fed mope and pain. Thanks Subhas Sir for the debut try on a limerick. 10++
Carrying the smell of a broken egg- A very nice try on a limerick. Nicely penned about hunger. 10+++
A gust of air-borne hope from kitchen- For an empty stomach's lope to heaven, Carrying the smell of a broken egg- So this funny poem is called a limerick, is it a 8-8-7-7-8 poem? Thanks for the poem. 10+ for its sharing.
A gust of air-borne hope from kitchen- For an empty stomach's lope to heaven, Carrying the smell of a broken egg- Thrown upon frying-pan and hot dog, Adding to the hunger fed mope and pain. Today only I understood what a limerick is. Lovely form. Thanks for the sharing. 10 for it.
Carrying the smell of a broken egg- Thrown upon frying-pan and hot dog, Adding to the hunger fed mope and pain. Nicely penned limerick. 10++
Thanks Sanjukta for the wise and kind remarks on the poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
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Carrying the smell of a broken egg- Thrown upon frying-pan and hot dog, Adding to the hunger fed mope and pain. A great try on a new form. Thanks for thee funny poem. 10+++
Thanks Sabita for the wise and kind remarks on the poem