Every Moon Sets -10: The Orphaned Plate Of Life Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Every Moon Sets -10: The Orphaned Plate Of Life

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The reptiles of urges
come out into the open
in the dark deep nights
that serve
all my trust in you
all my air of life
within lungs of love

washed clean
with fluid of deadly hunger
on the orphaned plates
and perennial thirst.

Saturday, November 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,heart love,moon
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Binayakumar Mohanty 11 November 2017

The reptiles of urges are no longer in the burrows sir.They are crawling in open frightening our very existence.Perrenial thirst never quenched.You are now in a top level of enlightenment sir.Presentation has no parallel.Simply best of the bests.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 November 2017

Thank you Sir for reading much more than I expected and for these inspiring words.

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Prativa Rani 15 November 2017

washed clean with fluid of deadly hunger on the orphaned plates and perennial thirst. What a lovely poem shared. 10+++ for the sharing.

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Alina Kaikeyi 15 November 2017

The reptiles of urges come out into the open in the dark deep nights that serve all my trust in you all my air of life within lungs of love Loved the poem so nicely penned. 10+++

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D Priyanka Singh 15 November 2017

The reptiles of urges come out into the open in the dark deep nights Lovely poem shared. 10++++ for the poem.

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Lopamudra Kajolika 15 November 2017

The reptiles of urges come out into the open in the dark deep nights A highly imaginative and lovely poem shared. 10++++ for the poem

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Anita Aparajita Das 15 November 2017

washed clean with fluid of deadly hunger on the orphaned plates and perennial thirst. What a lovely poem shared. 10+++ for the sharing

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Seema Sharma Rimi 15 November 2017

washed clean with fluid of deadly hunger on the orphaned plates and perennial thirst. Loved the poem so nicely penned. 10+++

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 15 November 2017

washed clean with fluid of deadly hunger on the orphaned plates and perennial thirst. What a lovely poem shared. 10+++ for the sharing.

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Sonali Parida 15 November 2017

washed clean with fluid of deadly hunger on the orphaned plates and perennial thirst. what a lovely poem shared. 10+++++for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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