Evidence Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Evidence

Rating: 5.0

Like pink rose petals gathering
All over my body
Yr kisses wash it
With a grace of the soft scent
As yr tears wipe away the evidence
Leaving no trace
Of our love

Tuesday, September 10, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal,leaving,pink,rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 10 September 2024

Fine piece......thanks for sharing.... LeeAnn....

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Nosheen Irfan 16 September 2024

Bitter love is artfully depicted in just a few lines. Kudos!

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Rebecca Navarre 13 September 2024

Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 13 September 2024

though your topic is betrayal, This is so beautifully composed! .. Isn't it a shame sometimes the most beautiful words can come to us when we're in pain...............

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M. Asim Nehal 10 September 2024

Dark truth....Full applause.

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Rob Lamberton 10 September 2024

…as if it had never been!

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