Excessive Love Poem by Justice For All

Excessive Love

Rating: 4.7


When the day comes when i die
And go up to the sky
Nothing but your face i will try
To remember
And i can not cry
Because your love was not a lie
Because your heart is always next to mine
I will land on every star
And i will tell her who you are
To every angle i will walk
About your kindness i will talk
And when it rains in your place
That means i am missing your face
In my heart i will try
To keep your love or i will die
I do not want to let it go
My soul can not handle this any more
I need your love inside
I can not live with out my guide
One tear from your eyes
Will turn off all my lights

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

i dont usually like love poems... but this was nice, ... i supose... 10 from me.

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Ken Suh 07 April 2009

this is what I call a true 'love peom'. Magnificent!

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Delicate Heart 06 April 2009

a swaying piece, that makes one become lost whilst reading it, very tender poem.read my poem.

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Jim Norausky 04 April 2009

A worthy love poem. Jim

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Honest Heart 03 April 2009

oh! ! ! ...what a moving poem this is! ! ! ......GREAT....a touching poem, very significant.......and it's true love.....keeeeeeeeeeep on writing your wonderful poems :) :) :) ........

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Gargi Saha 24 May 2009

A wonderful poem. Love & hugs..............

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Surya . 15 May 2009

how very loving and compasionate.lovely poem.posted 10 surya

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 April 2009

Lovely and beautiful...

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M M 19 April 2009

A very lovely and touching testimony of love! 10!

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Jane 92 11 April 2009

wow i like this one :) hope to be hearing more of you and waiting to read more of your poems

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