Experienced Recognition Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Experienced Recognition

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Am I perfect?
No.
But I am faithful to a fault,
To my opinion given.
And I do my best,
To not give it unsolicited.
Since my loyalty may be misunderstood.

But perfect?
Even if I chose to be...
From where would I have received,
To achieve...
Such an example to express it?
And who could identify my perfection?
You?

And if you can do that,
You would know...
Perfect I am not!

Although being obnoxious...
I have learned that from those who are skilled.
Perhaps that is what you identify?
With an experienced recognition!
That applies to your own comprehension.
And 'that' is the familiarity,
In me you see you'd like to mention.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Craig Anderson 23 July 2011

Excellent piece Larry with a nice kicker at the end. You have an easy flow as normal my friend. Regards. Craig

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