Express correction
I find myself
In safe lap
With no more fear
And silently hear
It is heavenly muse
That makes me to refuse
All earthly desires
That blast with blaring siren
I close the eyes
And try
To seek refuge
With protection so huge
I shall not think of others
While offering
Myself at good service
With sincere promises
I try to rededicate
And indicate
With remorse
But hopefully express correction of course
ending of your poem is very beautiful, i enjoyed reading the poem thanks for sharing
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i shall not think of others While offering Myself at good service With sincere promises Very sublimated spirit and ideas. Enjoyed reading the poem. Thanks for sharing.10++
Very profound insight to the inner struggle. Wonderfully expressed. 9 minutes ago by Ernest Gone | Reply
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This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I try to rededicate And indicate With remorse But hopefully express correction of course