Exsanguination Poem by Joshua Fegley

Exsanguination

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Your body...
convulses and twists;
as you slit your life,
from your wrist.

I ask you to stay,
but you whisper...no.
You can't handle this life,
and you want to go.

A long distance relationship,
ended over the phone...
As you say goodbye,
and I listen to you die.

I have only...
but one regret;
that you and I,
have never met...

Saturday, December 2, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: goodbye,relationship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 04 January 2014

Very intense and sad poem, Joshua. Can feel the pain through your words. Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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Amelie Anonymous 07 December 2006

This is an incredible poem Josh...draws out such emotion to read....

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Asma Bahrainwala 03 December 2006

a nice poem, joshua... the title is quite intriguing... i looked up the word 'exsanguination' in the dictionary...but cudnt get its meaning...is it ur coinage? ... Asma...

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