Ecstasy Poem by Joshua Fegley

Ecstasy

Rating: 5.0


I'm on my back,
and you're on top;
you're riding me all night...
and won't stop.

Life force flowing,
never to descend,
as we thrust on...
to a new level we transcend.

Our bodies...
sticky sweet,
as we love...
and our eyes meet.

Two is one...
one is none;
as our love flows,
our strength grows.

It increases...
our drive,
the longer we go,
the more we thrive.

A vivacious lust,
with a loving thrust;
a sensuous feeling...
leaves our mind and body reeling.

The redolence of...
sex in the air.
We cross the plane...
that no one else would ever dare.

Our love we can only see,
as our bodies...
shake and quiver,
into ecstasy...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 07 December 2006

Wow! ! And I thought I was going to read about a drug! Great read here! HG: -)

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Nathan Strange 08 December 2006

This one is alright, I kind of felt like I was on drugs reading it.

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Victor Ekpo 06 November 2008

Two is one; one is none; as our love flows; our strength grows. Perfection made. Pure ecstasy

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Aiden Murdock 26 April 2007

wow this poem is awesome, great imagery; thanks for the ur nice comment on my poem, take care

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Courtney Ramirez 17 January 2007

amazingly written, good job ~much love, courtney

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Holly Heron 20 December 2006

this is awesome

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M S 19 December 2006

ok this one came right after Drown and given that it has the same rythm and structure... well it sounds like you did this right after you offed the perv. I guess you two had something to celebrate. Cheers

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