Monday, January 30, 2023

Extraction And Renunciation Comments

Rating: 5.0

Turned forty
Turned one tooth Wiggly
Pained badly, got extracted quickly
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Indira Renganathan
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 February 2023

A very meaningful write. As we grow older, we become wiser in dealing with life. Another brilliant write.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 02 February 2023

No teeth? So good. He doesn't have the botheration of brushing them. Interesting poem. Tfs

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 31 January 2023

I have the same tooth problem Bravo! ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 January 2023

Made up his mind Renounced all his war Mindless of his look....appreciated this stanza of great substance. A wonderful poem dear madam. Top score!

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Anil Kumar Panda 31 January 2023

With age you get matured and renounce all worldly things. Even looking good does not matter. Very nice.

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