! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! **eyes Half Veiled***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! **eyes Half Veiled***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 2.9


As the symphony reels through
on rungs of colors by dappled skin
rainbow sneaks into vibes of blue
eyes seems to bestirs by green of wild
wave cascades to touch onshore.

rapture oscillates in vale of tune
by the octets of flute betiding
across the jingles of Florence
beneath musky mango grove
Oh it is incoming of spring virile.!

heart encores in tunes of rhythm
who knows quantum grin within
when wine ramifies through vein
I do remember murky eyes half veiled
at the thresh hold of my doorway.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 20 March 2010

nive piece., , it touches life of a true musician..

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Iris Rain 16 March 2010

It is strange when written words seem to have a voice, and sounds and sights mingle into your senses, and speaks to you on a sublime level. Eyes Half Veiled, senses, more than just words...

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Kee Thampi 16 March 2010

oscillates in vale of tune by the octets of flute betiding across the jingles of Florence beneath musky mango grove Oh it is incoming of spring virile.! heart encores in tunes of rhythm really best to read, it is a signet to our poem bestwishes

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BrittanyXD S 16 March 2010

this poem was great. i love how you word everything!

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Sandra Martyres 15 March 2010

A soothing write embellished with music and colours....Like marie I am no longer able to cast my vote on this site..this merits a 10++

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Elena Sandu 07 January 2012

What could somebody do but mark with a humble ten a shining gem! Thank you! !

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Your poetic language is so rich, full of poetic wealth! This is such a beautiful read! You truly inspire! ; D

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Sreekala Sukumaran 21 June 2010

Wow a very beautiful piece of poetry...enjoyed it so much..10+++.thanks for sharing...

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Ratnaprabha Raykar 10 April 2010

'getting drugged by music' i often wondered1 but now i know, a wonderful piece of poetry..your poetry too puts one in a trance

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Joseph Moore 23 March 2010

A good poem always makes you read it more than once, so that you can completly understand it. This poem in particular made me think, and that is what poetry is about.

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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