poet Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

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! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! **eyes Half Veiled***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

As the symphony reels through
on rungs of colors by dappled skin
rainbow sneaks into vibes of blue
eyes seems to bestirs by green of wild
wave cascades to touch onshore.

rapture oscillates in vale of tune
by the octets of flute betiding
across the jingles of Florence
beneath musky mango grove
Oh it is incoming of spring virile.!

heart encores in tunes of rhythm
who knows quantum grin within
when wine ramifies through vein
I do remember murky eyes half veiled
at the thresh hold of my doorway.

Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 11, 2010

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  • Elena SanduElena Sandu (1/7/2012 6:25:00 PM)

    What could somebody do but mark with a humble ten a shining gem! Thank you! !

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  • Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (7/3/2010 3:21:00 PM)

    Your poetic language is so rich, full of poetic wealth! This is such a beautiful read! You truly inspire! ; D

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  • Sreekala Sukumaran (6/21/2010 2:47:00 AM)

    Wow a very beautiful piece of poetry...enjoyed it so much..10+++.thanks for sharing...

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  • Ratnaprabha Raykar (4/10/2010 7:34:00 AM)

    'getting drugged by music' i often wondered1 but now i know, a wonderful piece of poetry..your poetry too puts one in a trance

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  • Joseph Moore (3/23/2010 1:36:00 PM)

    A good poem always makes you read it more than once, so that you can completly understand it. This poem in particular made me think, and that is what poetry is about.

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  • Lady Grace (3/20/2010 5:25:00 PM)

    nive piece., , it touches life of a true musician..

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  • Iris Rain (3/16/2010 3:48:00 AM)

    It is strange when written words seem to have a voice, and sounds and sights mingle into your senses, and speaks to you on a sublime level. Eyes Half Veiled, senses, more than just words...

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  • Kee Thampi (3/16/2010 1:24:00 AM)

    oscillates in vale of tune
    by the octets of flute betiding
    across the jingles of Florence
    beneath musky mango grove
    Oh it is incoming of spring virile.!

    heart encores in tunes of rhythm
    really best to read, it is a signet to our poem bestwishes

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  • BrittanyXD S (3/16/2010 1:23:00 AM)

    this poem was great. i love how you word everything!

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  • Sandra MartyresSandra Martyres (3/15/2010 7:18:00 AM)

    A soothing write embellished with music and colours....Like marie I am no longer able to cast my vote on this site..this merits a 10++

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  • Sahar Sahar (3/14/2010 7:38:00 AM)

    all tge emptiness of universe is filled with rhythmic dances of colores and notes of love songs,
    and heart felt emotions knock at your door, and you awaken in love standing before you...........i am listening Ravi Shastri with his magical flute and string and writing masnavi with quill

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  • Pradyumna Jyotir (3/14/2010 5:30:00 AM)

    sir......this poem of eternal beauty has been so wonderfully poticized here....thanks for sharing....

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  • Pradyumna Jyotir (3/14/2010 5:28:00 AM)

    Hello Sir....
    Spring has inspired so many poets and poems......and once again your poem is a fitting tribute to this season of paradise.its beautiful.....thank you for sharing.....
    Sridevi.

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  • Pradyumna Jyotir (3/14/2010 5:25:00 AM)

    Hello Sir.....Spring has been poeticized so beautifully here as also the pair of those lovely eyes....short....sweet and eloquent.

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  • Tsira Gogeshvili (3/14/2010 1:17:00 AM)

    Hi, subhendu, -Beautifully... Moods of spring corresponds through fine eyes...10...
    All the best,
    Tsira

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  • Callie CarrollCallie Carroll (3/13/2010 1:59:00 AM)

    Veiled eyes are a very striking image. The music of the words stirs the music of remembered springs in me.
    Regards,
    Callie

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