Facade Poem by Min Sia

Facade

Rating: 4.9


The world
On its shimmering beauty
Of all its members
All unique and equal
Flies on every galaxy
With the magnificent glow
Expanding territory
Majestic and glamor
Each piece has essence
Responsibility on conquest
Surviving independently
Believing the unknown




Yet teardrops fall
Yet blood stains all
'Why did you forsaken him? '
'Why did you kill her? '
'This belongs to me! '
'Please let us free! '
'You have no place here! '
'I hate you all! '

Those words people have known for so long...
End is what they have prayed for...
The world
A facade

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Dang 25 November 2008

I like it. =) Good job!

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Blue Eyes 24 November 2008

wow, what an excelent poem! i love the ideas ''theme of it''

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Mine Yours 24 November 2008

i love it, it includes all the thing that i love best.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 November 2008

Really a thoughtful poem written by princess Min! ! ! Dawn and dusk circling here! 10+++++

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Naru Kaede 24 November 2008

Wow, wow, wow, wow, , , Cool... piece of peace... hope this world can be something better in future, lets pray... Naru Kaede, ,

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Reina Lorenzo 04 December 2008

i can feel this piece of yours, well penned.. keep it up! !

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 04 December 2008

all unique and equal- that was excellent=10

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Josephine J.W 27 November 2008

Very thoughtful and interesting...I like it!

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Reshma Ramesh 26 November 2008

thiught provoking and an interesting write...well penned

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Pooja Ladyluck 25 November 2008

interesting.........gud 1..........thanx! ! !

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