Romeo Della Valle

Rookie - 337 Points (Ageless / Dominican Republic)

Fading Away - Poem by Romeo Della Valle

You have drank all the water
That vividly was in me
In order to calm you insatiable thirst
Forgetting that is was my precious life
That little by little you took away!
Leaving me completely dried
Like a lonely and forgotten rock
In the middle of nowhere...

You did not care at all
If I was going to suffer
In the long run,
For your own happiness
Was clearly your ultimate goal!
Now, one question remains
To be asked to the whole World!
After what she has done,
What should do
And where should I go?
An honest answer
Is embedded only on you!

Comments about Fading Away by Romeo Della Valle

  • (4/23/2012 7:36:00 PM)

    Wow i love this poem it is beautiful (Report) Reply

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  • Ramesh Rai (4/13/2012 1:49:00 AM)

    just compare this poem with the life of a poet. a poet is always so one question remains to be asked to the whole world what a poet leaves behind him. a nice question we; ; penned. well versed, good composition. may god take care of u. with regards. (Report) Reply

  • (4/9/2012 10:50:00 PM)

    A question asked by many i'm sure. Write the pain away! ! !
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  • Sara Fielder (4/4/2012 8:24:00 PM)

    Move on. It has made you a survivor. And THAT my friend, is not something ordinary people can say about themselves. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 1, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, April 2, 2012

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