A Broken Heart Poem by Romeo Della Valle

A Broken Heart

Rating: 4.7

Where the ends of life meet
A boundary is broken
Overstepped and outreached
When another creed has spoken...

This is the end for me and you
And that's why it is truly
A new beginning for me
When a sad separation
Is meant to be for both of us!

Have there ever been doubts?
I cannot remember
Anything saved that night
Some years ago since
I met you for the first time!

All that you offered me,
Disguised as happiness
Has been my disbelief
That I should be so blessed...

But still you are asking
That I stay by your side
And so entirely,
When you broke my heart
And tarnished my pride!

New York City

Ronald Grayson 22 February 2012

This a very good poem I loved the way it flowed, and spoke right to you

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 11 April 2011

this is a nice write it is a brave act to share such sad scenes and feelings good poem

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Malaya Roses 13 January 2011

Broken heart at the broken boundary after love no longer enough between two soul-mate. Poet's narration ended with wounded emotion and love never enough to attain sincere commitment. Reader can fell unease burden in poet's heart and suffocation in love is deadly. Well written and keep it this way.

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Melvin Banggollay 19 October 2009

Upon reading this well penned and so emotional piece, I can not help but feel every emptiness i have becoz of love. I got cheated and it cause me lot of pain that even up to now still linger though many years had passed.....take care

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Eyan Desir 22 November 2009

Well writtten a pleasure to read... good job

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 May 2020

life there is meeting of love but by the course of time everyone chooses own path oh then begins the time of pain in heart......

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 September 2019

Different ends meet the boundaries amazingly and we notice these. But still you are asking to stay beside heart. This poem is very brilliantly and excellently penned.10

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Akhtar Jawad 14 August 2019

Life may be a circle when we come to its end, we might be surprised to know that it's another start.

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Aishwarya Sriram 25 January 2016

End we feel is not the end... its just the begining... very nice thought! ! !

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Heather Wilkins 21 June 2013

when one thing ends something else is about to begin dear friend. look to the future. lovely

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Romeo Della Valle

Romeo Della Valle

Dominican Republic
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