Fake Love Poem by Crazy Vampire

Fake Love

Rating: 5.0


we need a break is what you say
just know that your rules, and orders i will no longer obey
i am finally happy and content
our love was just not meant

i understand it is over, and i will make it through someday
my world is no longer gray
i sacrificed so much for you
and for what? for you to say goodbye, adieu

save your hypocritical concern for someone who cares
i hope the person you choose is prepared
for all the stress and pain you will put them through
you have made me stronger, and for that i thank you

i have learned that you were a mistake
your love wasn't real, it was fake

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kieran J96 18 May 2010

not felt it myself but your writign seems so realsitic so 10 out of 10

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That was pretty inspiring. I'm glad you think this way, cuz I did not go through my break-up so well. Stay strong, good poem.

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Iron Panda 23™ 19 April 2010

\^-^/ WOOOO GO U! ! ! ! i can sooo relate to this....except he left me on my bday xP n said it would be a nice bday gift...i wrote a song dedicated to that x)

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