Fake Love Poem by Crazy Vampire

Fake Love

Rating: 5.0


we need a break is what you say
just know that your rules, and orders i will no longer obey
i am finally happy and content
our love was just not meant

i understand it is over, and i will make it through someday
my world is no longer gray
i sacrificed so much for you
and for what? for you to say goodbye, adieu

save your hypocritical concern for someone who cares
i hope the person you choose is prepared
for all the stress and pain you will put them through
you have made me stronger, and for that i thank you

i have learned that you were a mistake
your love wasn't real, it was fake

Monday, April 19, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: goodbye
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kieran J96 18 May 2010

not felt it myself but your writign seems so realsitic so 10 out of 10

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That was pretty inspiring. I'm glad you think this way, cuz I did not go through my break-up so well. Stay strong, good poem.

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Iron Panda 23™ 19 April 2010

\^-^/ WOOOO GO U! ! ! ! i can sooo relate to this....except he left me on my bday xP n said it would be a nice bday gift...i wrote a song dedicated to that x)

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Hemet, California
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