Fall Breeze Poem by Rini Shibu

Fall Breeze

Rating: 5.0


Sway in the air
Yellow, orange or red
Leaf or a flower
What your eyes see
when it falls on the ground
Make a beautiful orange sea
Time passed and
I walked through the fall
Oh the beauty lies there
Dead or alive
You mesmerize my eyes
Fall o fall
The cold breeze kissed my cheeks
And the joy in heart is at the peak.

Saturday, October 3, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rob Lamberton 17 January 2023

A very beautiful poem! I especially like " You mesmerize my eyes" and "And the joy in heart is at the peak."

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 January 2023

I walked through the fall Oh the beauty lies there dead or alive...beauty lies in boholder's eyes...it's true dear Rini. Wish you a happy and prosperous new year 2023.

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 November 2020

Hi Rini, Loved this beautiful painting in words, of the fall. In fact autumn is the loveliest of all seasons for, though it is the harbinger of the malady called winter, it signifies the ousting of the harsh and burning summer. But, somehow I am trained to hate autumn, because winters tend to be horrible for me because of my respiratory ailment. Your poem brings out the beauty of autumn in its entirety. Great poem. Thanks.

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Lamar Cole 03 October 2020

This is a very beautiful poem about autumn.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 October 2020

A lovely poem that captures the beauty and wonders of fall. Beautifully crafted with great imagery.

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