Fallen Poem by James Timothy Jarrett

Fallen

Rating: 5.0


The blows of time
Fall
savage
upon
my soul

I bleed

sorrow
like falling rain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shirley Hanley 13 September 2009

James... you knocked this one 'outa the ball park'...

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Linda Ori 25 May 2009

Profound wisdom in so few words. You encompass a lifetime in just a handful of words and phrases - very impressive! Linda :)

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Sonya Florentino 11 January 2009

I've been reading some of your poems an am impressed by them. But this one really got to me. I have a poem w/ a similar sentiment which I just uploaded, it's titled 'A Sudden Rain.'

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Reshma Ramesh 01 October 2008

wow short sweet and perfect...........very nice

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Anong All 20 July 2008

You sound like someone who may have lost some hair (lol)

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