Falling Poem by Brittney Miller

Falling

Rating: 5.0


I saw with blind eyes
And false hope
I trusted you
But
I didn't see the ace
up your sleeve
tell i fell on my face
Now
I set alone in the dark
with shame by my side
and hate in my heart
Because
You lied to me
you said you loved me
but yet you were with her

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adens Kamwi 30 December 2009

well penned fascinating stuff

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Deborah Cromer 11 July 2009

One more? Where with her, did you mean to put were with her? Sorry, I like poems, and I read them through pretty good sometimes. DC

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Beautiful, touching and heartfelt.10.

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