Sheldon Allen Saluta

Rookie (December 26,1991 / Davao City)

False Certainty - Poem by Sheldon Allen Saluta

“I’m rich! I’m rich” I shouted harshly
I can buy all things highly
People surround me will like me immediately
Mostly, no one would hate me intentionally

Summer air will be filled with closure
Living like god, no pressure
Bartering bliss and francs with all kinds of pleasure
This might be the best life ever, and that’s for sure

I’m pretty much certain, this is true
It is, no more sky of blue
I caught, all of a sudden, by a sunlight beam
And I’ve been awakened, it was all just a dream

Comments about False Certainty by Sheldon Allen Saluta

  • (5/1/2010 3:13:00 PM)

    Interesting presentation. Nice one. (Report) Reply

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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (4/27/2010 7:14:00 PM)

    every verse... every line..... nice one! (Report) Reply

  • (4/24/2010 9:07:00 AM)

    I also wish i could live like that.

    Pretty nice poem Mr S.
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  • (4/23/2010 9:58:00 AM)

    a nice dream...nicely expressed (Report) Reply

  • (4/23/2010 5:39:00 AM)

    wow! the poem is nice I mean really! I am adding it to my favouriates! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (4/22/2010 11:48:00 AM)

    Mesmerizing....I like the way you finished the verse...I mean, the certainty that you are rich and then suddenly waking up to see, it was all a my opinion, indicates that most of the people in their pride and richness, forget the realities....and it's all a dream that they live...I really liked your work...keep up the good work! (Report) Reply

  • (4/22/2010 10:59:00 AM)

    this poem is nice., i am happy it was just a dream (Report) Reply

  • (4/22/2010 7:31:00 AM)

    interesting title that's awakening...good read. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 30, 2010

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