Fantastic Fantasies Of The Lover Poem by sreelekha premjit

Fantastic Fantasies Of The Lover

Rating: 5.0


She spread her arms
and he took her in
holding her lightly
he travelled swiftly
over the hills
now precariously
her feet dangling in to vales
dipping into the clear streams
and rising to ride
the swift soft clouds
thunder trailing their path
lighting up the sky and the earth
dazed they watched
the birds
and
trying
to keep the pace
raced futile
the glowing sun glowered
but gently lowered his gaze
the sweet earth looking up
smiled and sent the scents
fragrances of flowers rare
wafts of heavenly iridescence
teasing taunting
now he laughed into her curls
and as she watched the sky turned
into one big huge rainbow
and earth a blue spot
so they raced past
for he is
swift and calm
smart and sloppy
kid and man
friend and foe
her nemesis
her blessing! ! ! ! !

Saturday, February 14, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 27 February 2009

Stellar imagework, and impassioned verve highlight this very criep, and tightly structured work...Solid craftsmanship... F j R 2009

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Ency Bearis 20 February 2009

a lovely write..with full of emotion..nice 10

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Kesav Easwaran 14 February 2009

good valentine day piece...sweetand soft...and superb ending lines...nice to read...10

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Fiona Davidson 14 February 2009

Beautiful valentines day write Sreelekha...thank you...10++

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Fiona Davidson 14 February 2009

Beautiful valentines day write Sreelekha...thank you...10++

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