Fatal Spirit Poem by Deborah Cromer

Fatal Spirit

Rating: 5.0


How does it happen, that we together can change so fast
What we thought was forever, now how could it last
My feelings raped daily, against my very will
Love and hate, wanting to live or wishing to kill
At one time we together are the grandest team
The top of the best, the pure, sweet cream
Then, another time, I cannot even stand your voice
Not seeing you ever again, feels like my only choice
Licking your skin with tasteful, loving delight
Then only to hate your scent and forever, always fight
To hold you and love you, blowing you kisses
Then again to flip you off, with the finger that never misses
Up, down, up, down, love, hate, love, hate
Are you my biggest enemy, or my truest mate
We make each other the happiest souls on earth
Only to turn again on each other, cussing our birth
Get out of my life, get, go, don't you ever call
Don't ever leave me, hold me tight, don't let us fall
On and off, up and down, will it ever end
A relationship unpredictable and wild, moving free like the wind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nikunj Sharma 24 July 2009

you almost took me to a fight scene between husband and wife....so real your poems are........ this is too good....small typ in the third line, check the spelling of daily...

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Deborah Cromer

Deborah Cromer

Portland, Oregon
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