Father To Son Poem by Sara Tehrani

Father To Son

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I look at you and see my eyes
looking through velvet skies
I wonder if you are bouncing through the same clouds as I
I haven't left this place
since i saw your mothers face
and now she forces me to ripen
to release the child I always knew
for the egg that beautifully grew
to become the father figure for you.

Copyrighted Sara Tehrani 29/05/09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akinyemi Taiwo 12 October 2018

Complimenting , Nice and Cool SongPoem

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Craig Turner 06 August 2009

very good, every line compliements the next, really conjeurs up the situation of two parties the mother and the father, good work x

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L.P. Alexanders 10 June 2009

very accurate depiction of fatherly feelings, i loved it!

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good write dear....u read mine papa do u knwo & papa you too and O, mother

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Aashish Ameya 05 June 2009

nice poem, Sara. depict father's true emotion.

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