Four Walls Poem by Sara Tehrani

Four Walls

Rating: 2.8


Lets get out of here
I think you’ve seen too much of these four walls
Lets take you somewhere you can be free
To be the man that you’ve always wanted to be

Lets get you out of here
I know this is your home
But you never painted those white walls
Its still got the memory of the past you cannot let go

See, there’s a world out there
Waiting for you with open arms
And its begging, begging you to see its charms
Charms of the sky, the sun and the sea
So much more than these four walls will ever be.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

It's hard to let go Or dropp your walls Nice poem 10 ~Unique~

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Siddharth Singh 09 August 2009

Let's get out to explore this beautiful world. Nicely written.

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Christopher Flynn 03 July 2009

Life has so much to share If we can break down our walls And experience it. Nice poem I like the style of thought in it.

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Anjali Sinha 08 June 2009

lovely poem dear sara dont get claustrophobic --good write

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Aashish Ameya 05 June 2009

good one Sara, not even home, but every relationship should set us free.

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Saadat Tahir 27 May 2009

hi sara aakum this ais a uniquely beautiful poem...u can be rightly proud of it im really impressed it so simple and fluid yet it portrays a complex unterstanduing of the human psyche you did well there...see if u have time 'Scary monsters...Psychic salsa' its atenner cheers

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