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Fatty Bum Bum

Rating: 3.9
How did I end up in this state?
I'm always fighting with my weight,
I'd like to put it down to fate,
but that ain't honest!

I know for sure what I do wrong,
I've known the truth all along,
but I always sing a different song,
and that ain't honest!
I've tried to blame my family,
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Skyrone Scorpio 02 May 2014
Hi there Tom, you are onto something special here, I know this so I will be looking...Bless. and keep up the great work.
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Paul Sebastian 02 May 2014
Hi Tom, A beautiful poem on submission. You are honest about your goal and you have told it openly in this poem. A good write!
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Nice catchy title. Loved your poem of honesty. Very revealing and honest.
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Michelle Claus 01 May 2014
Your poem makes us chuckle, and we also empathize.
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Katelin Taylor 01 May 2014
Cute and I like the repeated last line of each stanza. Very nicely done.
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Savita Tyagi 01 May 2014
Wonderfully amusing poem. A light heart will sure take couple of ounces away from my fat! Thank you for sharing.
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Connie Yost 01 May 2014
I wish you the best of luck in your honest efforts and hope to see another poem from you one day soon, which you have named, just Call Me Slim!
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Leslie Philibert 01 May 2014
Witty write indeed. If you like modern poetry you may enjoy my work, which has recently been published in magazines in the US and Canada
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Eva Arc 01 May 2013
Really modern and up-to- date
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R.j. Wynn 01 May 2013
And here I thought I was yhe only one.
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