Feel The Beats Poem by Rini Shibu

Feel The Beats

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I have got a heart that beats like yours
And It gets hurt same as yours
Why do you hurt my feelings...
Can't you see, It aches for you
When you walk away, it searches for you
And It looks for the traces of footstep
Why do you hurt my feelings..
Can't you hear the call, it's weeping
The tears are flowing, can you wipe them
Come back to me, I am waiting for you
Here I am for you, just for you
Don't break this heart, it's all yours
Don't hurt my feelings..

Saturday, January 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: song
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lamar Cole 06 January 2018

This is a very heartfelt and touching write about feel the beats.

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Rini Shibu 07 January 2018

Thanks Lamar for posting your feedback

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 January 2018

'Why you hurt my feelings...'? Love hurts! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 December 2022

A simple, sober and beautiful poem...so well dressed!

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Robert Murray Smith 27 July 2018

Great write. Enjoyed.++10- - - - -

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Robert Murray Smith 17 May 2018

A poignant but hopeful write.+++10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 January 2018

Why do you hurt my feelings.. Can't you hear the call, it's weeping The tears are flowing, can you wipe them Come back to me, I am waiting for you.....Brilliantly penned! Thanks for sharing Rini

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Rini Shibu 19 January 2018

Thanks for your compliments Dillip

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Unnikrishnan E S 14 January 2018

(part 2) But, as Robert has said, we should have repetitive stanzas to augment the mood. Like the pallavi in film songs repeated again and again... -unnikrishnan

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Rini Shibu 15 January 2018

Thank you so much Unnikrishnan for your remarks.

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