Once again i can feel the breeze
And the feeling is not going to cease
Yes i stepped into the pool of joy
And i will not let anyone destroy
Just stay away dont block the way
Once again let me see the suns ray
Hi Rini...this week about a few poets...gals and guys @ 40 breezed me 'twas lovely your breezing poetry believe me
I like the metric rhythm and rhyme: it is the cadence of a heart which feels to enjoy life again; free of negativity and toxicity! Free as a bird can be!
Hi Rini, A little breeze removes the feeling of suffocation instantly. And ushers in joy, comfort, happiness. Figuratively, opening one’s heart to vent the pent up emotions, hatred, sorrow to a friend, to someone who loves you, saves the day. Loved this metaphor. With vast profound connotations....1000+++
Such a simple and beautiful write... loved it.