Feel The Breeze Poem by Rini Shibu

Feel The Breeze

Rating: 5.0


Once again i can feel the breeze
And the feeling is not going to cease
Yes i stepped into the pool of joy
And i will not let anyone destroy
Just stay away dont block the way
Once again let me see the suns ray

Friday, November 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: joy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashika Murali Acharya 14 March 2019

Such a simple and beautiful write... loved it.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 November 2018

Hi Rini...this week about a few poets...gals and guys @ 40 breezed me 'twas lovely your breezing poetry believe me

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Mihaela Pirjol 17 November 2018

I like the metric rhythm and rhyme: it is the cadence of a heart which feels to enjoy life again; free of negativity and toxicity! Free as a bird can be!

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 November 2018

Hi Rini, A little breeze removes the feeling of suffocation instantly. And ushers in joy, comfort, happiness. Figuratively, opening one’s heart to vent the pent up emotions, hatred, sorrow to a friend, to someone who loves you, saves the day. Loved this metaphor. With vast profound connotations....1000+++

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Lamar Cole 16 November 2018

Great poem about feel the breeze.

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