iam so sad
to face my dad
he insist me to get first
and swear that
he will give me a hake to eat
but i not even deserve for the cake that i ate
i was hale at once
but i became pale and tense
i became dull and null
i got fear to hear about my peer
i thought it would be pace to my success
but i ever imagined that my face would be pale
when i know my marking i was lurking
full of confusion that led to my tension
my pronunciation was as cub
owing to commotion
i will come to nub
that it's all of my examination
A great start with a nice poem, masarapu. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
you have composed an outstanding poem. keep it up with your study. You r more responsible. B fearless and go ahead. God will help u.
Conspicuously expressed feelings. Sublime. Although do keep sentences at similar length and begin with a capital letter. Just general grammatical requirements, nevertheless very good write. Williams, T.
believe its simple poem..coz dont wanna good poet worry for marks....easy...well that shows u wanna be more sincere n responsible...good! :)
Good.... Expressed your feelings clean n clear.... Keep writing many more...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
fine, , , , , , , , stand to the expectation of ur dad