Down with fever
was my love forever
my eyes all over
on my child with fever.
Body hot, lips dry
my child slept with a cry
moaning and groaning cry
paining and hurting cry.
The heat was felt
the pain was felt
the cry was painful
but I was all hopeful.
The fever would subside and
my baby would sit upright.
You have expressed very well the concern a mother has for a sick child. Nice poem indeed.
Yeah..A Mother gets very tensed and depressed when her child suffers from any ailment.. Very well expressed the pain a mother goes through..10++++
Spilling of pain from a mothers heart is strong here. Very nice.
This poem shows the affection of mother loves to child..... This poem shows the way that how mother feeling struggle in his heart when his child suffered from fever
nice lines......shows your love and affection towards you baby.She will be fine very soon inshallah
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Awwwwwww such sensitive poem...God bless the child. You penned down so beautifully the pain a mother goes through seeing her child ill. Perfect 10++++
Thank you Aarzooji you understand me the best. Thank you for your comforting words.