Final Plea Poem by Barry Middleton

Final Plea

Rating: 5.0


words cannot hold you
you vanish into dreams

only memories remain
empty trees in winter

the wind whistles
recalling summer's ghost

I go on a journey now
I cross the river of stars

my tears are a final plea
that you remember me

Final Plea
Wednesday, July 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: death,remember
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leloudia Migdali 30 October 2016

Another beautiful poem! Every line a stab in heart!

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Barry Middleton 30 October 2016

Thank you so much. Glad that it touched you.

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Dimitrios Galanis 28 July 2016

A poem to shed a tear on its plea.Moved, my dear Barry.I translate it immediately.Hope for the analogous one in my words, in my language.

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Barry Middleton 29 July 2016

Thank you as always Dimitrios. I wish that I could read Greek.

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Tom Billsborough 27 July 2016

Best poem I've read in a long time. Powerfully created images. I see you like Anne Sexton. One of my favourites. And you too after this effort.

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Barry Middleton 27 July 2016

Thank you again Tom. I really appreciate you reading my work.

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Darren Jkoeryo 27 July 2016

Excellent poem Man. enjoyed this immortality.

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Barry Middleton 27 July 2016

Thank you very much for reading and commenting.

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