sarwar chowdhury

Rookie - 14 Points (Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.)

Finder Of The Symbols And Metaphors - Poem by sarwar chowdhury

I do not like to click the browser of dark sites. Once i entered. They made me deaf and dumb and fool. I had lost my mind's eye too.

No no i am not talking about carnal desire
The things are made
with various colour shade
to destroy perfumed spirit as like forest fire.

Having a long therapy my mind's and memory's eyes are ok now. I am finding the symbols of love and perfume of metaphors to see smiles of naked mendicants. All of singer birds in the world are wating.

The dawn never ever able to touch the dusk. It is destined.

Comments about Finder Of The Symbols And Metaphors by sarwar chowdhury

  • (9/10/2009 10:08:00 PM)

    There is something interesting in here which I could not quite lay hold of, but it has some
    original concepts I liked.
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  • (9/25/2008 6:18:00 AM)

    the dawn never able to touch the dusk, improbable- unique perception. i like the way you have used the metaphor of cyber world. thought provoking.10+ (Report) Reply

  • (8/10/2008 7:51:00 PM)

    'The dawn never ever able to touch the dusk. It is destined. '

    A beautiful finale---- thanks for sharing ++++++++10 X anju
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  • (7/13/2008 3:20:00 PM)

    This is very inspiring. You have great talent! (Report) Reply

  • (7/6/2008 10:46:00 PM)

    hi, sarwar! ! I think it's very creative the way u use the virtual world as a symbol... nice work.... =) (Report) Reply

  • (7/6/2008 10:22:00 AM)

    good point encapsulated here, with a bit of virtual world involved here
    nice begining
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  • (7/6/2008 8:39:00 AM)

    This is very good. Though I find it hard to understand. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 6, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, July 7, 2008

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