sarwar chowdhury

Rookie - 14 Points (Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.)

5- O Woman! I See Your Glow! - Poem by sarwar chowdhury

Scornful some call you,
But I would not like to say so
Petulants are living with fade hue.
Woman, o woman! I see your glow!

Intense zeal smile while you read by me,
Unparalleled radiance within you I see.

Things are not good not all bad,
I like to see you not humiliated.

Woman, o woman! I see your glow!
Adam were crying, praying for you Eve.
Tolstoy's Anna karenina you
Helen of Troy
Leonerdo's Monalisa
You magnetic magnolia.
Your affection can touch faster than electromagnetic wave!
Rumi's ray of God you
Holy spirit
Source of peace
Galeeb’s rosary beads for worship God.
You most devoted Mom
You caring sister
You attentive friend
You sweet lovely dear!
Without you survival is zero here.
Your love makes man valiant, free.
Seeing you Onoyza’s beauty-
Arab Imraaul kayes became mad and great.
You the Tajmahal.
Allan poe's Annabel lee.
Lorca’s Amparo
Shakespere, Tagore, Milton mounted by you.
Poem emits poemotharapy because of your presence.
You the gentle zephyr, blow always blow,
Woman, o woman! I see your glow!

Once beloved woman's heart were singing for -

'Shocked you
Confused you
Contused you
That was the third infused things you too knew.
Is turn off means torn up by?
Apart though, living in you why?
Can't say
Can't bear
Moved but mind say you are the dear!
Seeing your photo me moist with tears! '

That's why, o woman! I love you and care you all.

You the gentle zephyr, flow in me flow,
Woman, o woman! I see your glow!
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A tribute womanhood.

©copyright by sarwar chowdhury. all rights reserved.


Comments about 5- O Woman! I See Your Glow! by sarwar chowdhury

  • Priyambada Chatterjee (6/2/2010 10:24:00 AM)

    Your affection can touch faster than electromagnetic wave!

    Unique thought....very spontaneous....It's an experience to go thru your writing.10+
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  • Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty (10/26/2009 11:27:00 AM)

    PS:
    Excellent conception and addressing!
    With a but…woman must be womane [like humane] nonetheless…
    Glory unto woman and womane.

    Again a but prefix wo-man Why? Wo= Instruction to stop or whoa to Man LOL!
    dr.sakti
    Find me in my poems
    ds
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  • Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty (9/2/2009 11:07:00 AM)

    Like flowery archipelago of historic lovers and their poets.
    But Radha-Krishna is missing.
    Refreshment of psyche
    Voted ten
    dr. sakti
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  • Kathryn Marie Thurman (12/4/2008 3:13:00 PM)

    Simply Beautiful.
    i'm in ah of this poem.
    well-done. :)

    -Kathryn
    p.s. please read my poems if you don't mind, i would love to hear your opinion of them.
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  • Sarah SissonSarah Sisson (12/3/2008 6:02:00 AM)

    I like this tribute! (Report)Reply

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  • Kaylee Questionable (11/10/2008 1:46:00 PM)

    Wow I really.like this poem
    but maybe I am biast!

    but it is very well written non the less.
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  • Miriam Maia PaduaMiriam Maia Padua (10/12/2008 8:17:00 PM)

    What a beautiful tribute to women! Thanks for the great respect to all the women in this world...Such sweet poem can make every woman's heart leap with joy..For this...my 10+ for you.....God bless you always... (Report)Reply

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  • Uriah Hamilton (10/12/2008 5:45:00 PM)

    Worthy praise, I appreciate the dignity
    and gentleness of this line:

    'I like to see you not humiliated.'
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  • Sadiqullah KhanSadiqullah Khan (10/10/2008 3:19:00 AM)

    A great write but i find the flow 'interrupted', , , , , , , , , this may be your unique style, , i loved reading it, ,10 (Report)Reply

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  • Seema Chowdhury (10/6/2008 1:15:00 AM)

    thanbks for giving so much respect, importance and value to woman. nice to rwead such a lovely poem. my 10 for you. Eid mubarak to you and your family. (Report)Reply

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  • Little Hatila ;) (10/4/2008 5:17:00 PM)

    nice and i love it.....'Without you survival is zero here.'was the best part that i like it...keep going (Report)Reply

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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (10/4/2008 1:09:00 PM)

    A nice poem. A love it like your other poems.
    Amazing content.
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  • Stephanie Saba (10/4/2008 1:09:00 PM)

    very nicely written.
    good choice of words.
    keep writing. :)
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  • Suma Varsha (10/4/2008 9:03:00 AM)

    gr8 compostion..
    thanx for sharing..
    keep writin..
    all the very best..
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  • Linda Moore (10/4/2008 8:39:00 AM)

    Glowing words of Women, Surely they come from a Glowing Heart.......10 (Report)Reply

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (10/4/2008 8:28:00 AM)

    The poem glows well in every baits and stanzas....right to the end.....juz like the magnetic woman's heart! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • P K (10/4/2008 5:12:00 AM)

    excellent! ! ! ....good thought! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Nia Riz (10/4/2008 4:44:00 AM)

    i liked the poem.....only half of it because i only read half of the poem....i couldnt read more...i am sorry...the words are tooo tough for me to understand....but still the message about woman and womanhood is clearly understood....i specially love the first line.. (Report)Reply

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  • PERSIAN NIGHTINGALEPERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (10/4/2008 2:48:00 AM)

    woman the symbol of god's beauty...10 (Report)Reply

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  • Chitra - (10/4/2008 1:48:00 AM)

    a profound tribute to womanhood, thanks for honoring the dignity of the fairer sex (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 2, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, July 27, 2009


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