Mind breeding
Hell in life
Searching for light
Within oneself
Finding Heaven
Excellent expression about man's quest for heaven but it is situated beyond the worldly pursuits of the mind. Be careful. Thanks a lot for this small philosophical poem.
so THAT'S where Heaven hangs out! the first two lines i 'didn't get'. the rest i liked. bri :)
Bri, thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you liked the latter of the poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The greatest discovery is finding heaven within ourselves! No external force or physical possession can make one rich or happy! We seek Heaven elsewhere, but fail to look inside. Here I am reminded of John Milton's famous lines-'The mind is its own place and in itself, can make a Heaven of Hell, a Hell of Heaven'.... So glad to note that my poem has inspired you to write this little gem of a poem!
Valsa, thank you so much for the positive insightful comments. And for the inspiration. I'm glad that you like the poem.