Finding Home Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Finding Home

Rating: 5.0


There in front of me
All that was my life
Such loving parents
Brothers and sister
Such truly great friends
Teachers guiding me
Bosses screwing me
And some leadership
For ship 'bout to sink

The ship sailed
Freely wisely
The horizon
Beckoning now
Surrounded by
Loving White Light
Finding its home

Thursday, December 1, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: lessons of life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 December 2022

Dear Richard, thank you for this highly philosophical, insightful poem, full of wisdom.

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Richard Wlodarski 04 December 2022

And thank you for the same, Geeta. You are one of the poetesses that continues to inspire me.

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David Wood 01 December 2022

Great poem. I find when I get to the pier its only to see the ship sailing away........

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 December 2022

I love all your poems but owing to some reasons I don't put comments. I am afraid that others may decline to put comments If my remarks are there for which I am a bit reluctant to put comments. This is a beautiful poem. I have already taken it to my favourites.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 December 2022

I love your concluding lines dear Richard, Loving White Light Finding its home, a very inspiring poem full of deep philosophy and great wisdom, I feel the love that is deep inside, to my Favourites and Top Score for you.

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Richard Wlodarski 04 December 2022

Dillip, many THX for adding my poem to your favourites.

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Pallab Chaudhury 04 December 2022

Beautifully penned one- reestablishing the link between the past with the present...

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Richard Wlodarski 04 December 2022

Many THX, Pallab for being part of that link! !

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 December 2022

For the loving white light finding its way home.....top score and to my favourite. Brilliant poem

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Richard Wlodarski 04 December 2022

I see that those words resonate as much with you as they do with me. Geeta, THX so very much for adding my poem to your favourites.

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