Finish Point.. Poem by Rini Shibu

Finish Point..

Rating: 5.0


Mistakes are not been repeated
But you are defeated
Victory is at the distant end
But don't lose hope and go ahead
Need patience to move on
Though there are bumps and stones
One day you will reach the finish point
wipe the thoughts which disappoints

Monday, March 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: defeat,life,victory
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seamus O Brian 22 March 2018

An encouraging thought to begin the day. Thank you, Rini!

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Rini shibu 22 March 2018

Thanks Seamus, glad to read your comment

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 March 2018

Though victory is in much distance yet we mustn't lose hope and to go ahead. Time will come we must reach the goal. Beautiful poem amazingly shared.10

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Rini Shibu 20 March 2018

Thanks kumarmani for your wonderful remark

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Lamar Cole 19 March 2018

Great poem about finish point.

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Rini Shibu 20 March 2018

Thanks cole for reading and commenting Rini

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 March 2018

Need patience to move on ye soo true Riny, one day we are all going to reach the finishing point...... our efforts now in writing is highly calculated by God... i hope and pray that we all meet together as poets and poetesses in heaven..... tony

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Rini Shibu 20 March 2018

Thanks Tony.hope we all meet together

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 March 2018

Rini, such an inspiring write👍👍👍

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Rini Shibu 20 March 2018

Thank you so much Bernard for commenting Rini

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