Fire Poem by Rini Shibu

Fire

Rating: 5.0


There is a spark of fire
in my heart
The heat is increasing
spreading its warmth
all over me
Just before a huge fire
the smoke lifts up to the sky
It's not the dark clouds
which is consuming me
But the fire to burn me
into a new being
To shine like the sun
giving light to all
A world full of light and
no shadows and darkness around

Saturday, December 2, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: fire
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 19 March 2018

Hi rini, A World full of light- So are your poems! ! Lovely

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Rini Shibu 20 March 2018

Thanks for your lovely comment..it's a pillar of encouragement

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 December 2017

A beautiful poem! The fire you are talking about is something else that burns inside yielding light to others! Very nicely written Rini! ......10/10

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Rini Shibu 06 December 2017

Thanks Dillip.. Let the fire shine in all

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 December 2017

Hi Rini, Very lovable, poignant poem. : : There is a spark of fire : : in my heart: : It is this fire within us that is keeping us alive, and shine with, what the Vedas call, SURYA TEJUSS. A magnifiscent 100+++

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Rini Shibu 04 December 2017

Thanks for posting your feedback Unnikrishnan..

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Richard Wlodarski 03 December 2017

And just like the phoenix, you shall be reborn. And rise to great heights! Rini, thank you for this truly inspirational poem.

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Rini Shibu 03 December 2017

Thanks for reading and commenting Richard

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 December 2017

A great write with a vision to give light to all...10

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Rini Shibu 03 December 2017

Thanks Rose for posting your comment

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